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Oh good someone seeking improvement.
WELL. A lot of the characters' head seems rather squished and or flat (Sonic Tails Knuckles) and many of the characters seem to look in the same direction. You also seem to have trouble with a certain angle and it makes them seem a rad cross-eyed. There are plenty of tutorials discussing the 3/4ths view on Deviantart. If you want one please inform me. The limbs on the characters seem kind of fat as well.
There is little to no shading on this and it seems slapped on. Same with the highlights. I applaud you for have a somewhat consistent light source. I also commend you for pulling off a collage. Though a few problems I see are characters who lack perspective (Knuckles Amy Silver Blaze ) A lot of things seem to lack depth. I recommend observing natural things in the actual world and see how light reflects off the object.
Otherwise this piece is pretty well done. It just lacks in a few areas.