Thorns and Roses: Redone - WIP

I Finally got those artist pens that I've been dying for CX

<__< This was a sorta practice session gone wild
After doing research on being a better comic artist, and from studying art of others, I'm trying out putting more detail in my work XDD

<__< Meh~ I'm not sure if I like this or not... the colored version looks like CRAP... the sketch though I was proud of XD
Until I tried putting on my computer

Anyway: feel free to critique it, (to the best of your ability as I have no premium membership )


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Enjoy~